Charlie II

An interesting piece, jasminebells. You've clearly got a good grasp of writing. Now it's all about perfecting and honing your craft. 1. Imagery Imagery is all about taste. The problem ...

I totally had one of these before, once upon a time. But rather than dig up a thread that dates back to 2008, I think it's about time I made ...

1) I think you've certainly been careful and sensitive with your description, but that doesn't really change the content you're trying to express. So, in my opinion at least, I'm ...

Russia doesn't look so big now on that little map. We can take it! :wink: All we need to do, really, is start advancing on all fronts and just meet ...

Kitty15 -- if you go to "My YWS" --> "Change Site Settings" then it will be the first of the yes/no selection boxes. At least that's where it is for ...

Powerful stuff, Joshuapaul. I think I can find some advice for you nonetheless. :wink: Before I begin, I'd like to draw your attention to here: Please make sure you have ...

Nick | Pewter City Pokémon Academy All five of them stood in Dr. Bernstein’s Pokémon-less office and shivered in the cool clinical air. Only Katya seemed truly at home in ...

Hey W0lfbane, let's have a look at this (very!) short story! :wink: 1. Description The first thing I noticed, which was obvious because it wasn't there, was detailed description. Now ...

I really don't remember the accidental mass PM -- but either way, increased activity is a good thing. As is a surprise YWS festival in August! :D

Real pros buy a pro account and then re-enable the ads! :wink: Isn't that right, Jabbs?

Nick | The edge of Pewter Town The journey back down the mountain was a lot faster than the slow slog up. Thank goodness, really -- Nick didn’t think he ...

Hello LindsayG! I must say, I like poems/stories that focus on a writer's perspective on life! :wink: Perhaps it's because we get told to "write what we know!" and that ...

Name: Charlie II, Charlie, Charliezard Rank: Private Speciality: PUN-slinger Favourite Colour: Nondescript Grey Allegiances: YWS Place on Field: Western Front

Razcoon -- "Just... a little bit... further!" Emmzziee -- The hair's looking good -- and next time you come into the YWS Chatroom, don't be scared if we're not all ...

It looks great -- lovely and smooth with far less angles than the current look of the site! And oh yeah, now I remember, it's all about the writing isn't ...